This is an excerpt from my novel.

When we got to the gate, The guards demanded,”who goes there?”with loud,booming voices.I replied by knocking them over with a stun spell. “they’ll be out for a while” said my dad. We walked toward a drawbridge covering a pit full of lava and poisonous snakes. They were enchanted so they could survive. Without any warning, the doors opened. They were so tall and beautiful. I could see gunmen up in the towers.Dad shot a plume of blue smoke at them and they instantly fell asleep. We entered the castle.There was a large, dark hallway that we had to walk down. Bones littered the floor,and there were stuffed deer heads hanging from the walls. At the end stood a pair of doors. Little did we know that those led to kronoses chambers. Tokoga knew, so he led us down a different hallway. He said,”This is a secret passageway that leads to krososes chambers. Take this way.” I got my wand ready. But he said,” we won’t fight him today,we will fight him on our next visit.” I replied,”we’re going to visit again?” “yes.we need to get to know this land well. He could attack us anywhere.” I agreed with my dragon. Over the past few weeks he had grown to be big enough to ride. He would be a big advantage. We traveled down a passageway that led to a balcony overlooking kronos’es chambers. “Jukio flahis ore bvores awghins meap verrt cuckoo” said kronos to his dementor . He spoke in a weird language that no one but me could understand. He said,translated by me,Owen “ make it rain.”

You will have to read more to find out what happens!