This is a piece of my book and after you read this part, I hope you will want to read the rest of my novel to find out what happens!
Exerpt:
That night Mac woke up to some screeching in the barn. He didn’t take a minute to think the only thing he thought about was Toothless. Mac slipped on his snippier uniform, he grabbed his bear claw knife, survival knife and his Walters skinning knife. Then Mac grabbed a spool of thread, blankets and his air soft. He flew out the door and dashes out to the barn. Mac thought inside his brain, if somebody out there I’ll skin them alive. Like a secret agent Mac pressed his back to the wall and slowly moved towards the barn door like a stealthy owl moves through the night sky hunting for mice. His left hand clutched the barrel of the gun like the grip of a iron vice. He shot around the corner of the barn just in time to see a dark shadow jump out of the stall where Toothless was and run. Mac put the sight of his gun to his eye. He thought about the time he played one shot one kill on Call of duty. Don’t miss. Don’t miss. Don’t miss his brain said. PINK went the gun. The shadow fell to the ground. Mac ran over and tied his hands and feet with a rope in a tight knot. Mac pulled back the butt of his gun and banged it on the strangers forehead hard. The stranger instantly passed out. Don’t mess with Toothless Mac said with his teeth clenched. Mac knelt back down by toothless. Toothless had a few small cuts and one large one. Mac did not see the small ball of black in the corner. He opened the back of his knife and took out a small plastic bag. He ripped the small plastic bag open and out dropped a needle into his lap. He used the thread and needle back together. Only then did he hear a pop crackle pop. He looked in the corner and saw the black egg…
cool,just plain cool.
good!
Is this supposed to be a story and what’s going to happen next? I read a series with a boy named Hiccup that had a dragon named Toothless. I like how there’s a lot of suspense in the story.
Cool story! I really liked it. But I want to hear the rest…
WOW that is really good!
I like the way you describe what is happing in the barn. What animal harms toothless? I am not Interested in dragon stories, but I am still interested in dragons.